Changed Idea

After discussing the problems with our current idea with our teachers. We decided that we'd need a new story-line to accommodate the action that we wanted to incorporate into our sequence. After much consideration we decided that our idea would be based around a stolen weapon prototype that would make the wearer invisible and give them integrated graphics. The story would be about a developer who steals the suit when he finds out the makers want it for bad, the film follows him as he tries to escape from the company and get the suit to safe hands.

Our opening scene now goes like this:

> Two agents walk in a garage area are talking about what they're looking for
> A tracker is pulled out and the agents start looking for the item, not knowing exactly what it is they are after
> The tracker goes haywire and the agents aren't sure what's going on
> One agent pulls out a gun and starts panic shooting
> The invisibility on the developer is shut off and he appears behind the agent with the gun and takes him out
> He then moves onto the man with the tracker in his hand
> The sequence cuts to the film title as a bullet is fired

The things we've had to change:

The roles of our characters have changed to two agents and a developer instead of the previous character roles of three teenagers, one of whom steals the weaponised suit and kills the two friends.

The plot is a lot less complex allowing us to film it more easily and also allowing the audience to understand the sequence without having to explain the background of the characters and the reasoning behind their actions.


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